A Constitution?

The Commons Political and Constitutional Reform Select Committee have issued a draft Constitution .
Not a bad piece of work although the preamble leaves me a bit cold......what do you think?

PREAMBLE[54]

United, we stand in celebration of the diverse voices that make up the great chorus of our nation. Confident in our individuality, and steadfast in our shared values and common purpose, we—the citizens of the United Kingdom of Great Britain and Northern Ireland—have come together in the spirit of self-determination in order to establish the principles of our law and governance.

 By this act, we create for ourselves a sovereign state, animated by many spirits, accountable to all. Conscious of the responsibility that we bear to future generations—and of their role in defending and regenerating this Constitution—we lay down maxims crafted to promote civic harmony, mutual tolerance, universal wellbeing, and social and political freedom.

 We embody these ideas in democratic government, and enshrine them in a system of law. And we empower each citizen to reform this design, by democratic process and political debate. By popular mandate, we establish this Constitution:

 To recognise every citizen as an equal partner in government—at a local, regional, and national level.

 To affirm that each citizen is entitled to fair and equitable treatment under the law.

 To establish the principle of equality of opportunity for all citizens.

 To eradicate poverty and want throughout the nation.

 To protect and cultivate community identities within the four great countries of the union: England, Scotland, Wales, and Northern Ireland.

 To preserve our common environment, and to hold it in trust for future generations.

 To safeguard freedom of thought, conscience, and assembly; and to facilitate peaceable dissent.

 And to protect these fundamental rights against the encroachment of tyranny and the abdication of reason.

 Through this undertaking, we remind one another of the benefits and duties of citizenship enshrined in membership of the United Kingdom, challenging ourselves to enact these principles throughout society.

 Let our example stand as an inspiration to the peoples of the world, and to their rulers and their governments.

 Let our principles animate our dedication to peace and justice in international affairs.

 And let our united resolve grow ever-stronger under the enlightened auspices of this Constitution.

THE UK CONSTITUTION

OUR DEMOCRATIC SETTLEMENT

The United Kingdom is a constitutional monarchy.[55]

Possible alternative:

The United Kingdom shall be a democracy where the people are sovereign.

There shall be a separation of powers guaranteeing an independent and elected executive and legislature, and an independent and impartial judiciary.

The United Kingdom shall operate as a Union of nations with power devolved to the lowest appropriate level.

Status

The United Kingdom constitution is composed of the laws and rules that create the institutions of the state, regulate the relationships between those institutions, or regulate the relationship between the state and the individual.

These laws and rules are not codified in a single, written document.

Constitutional laws and rules have no special legal status.

Possible alternative:

The Constitution of the United Kingdom shall be the basic law according to which the United Kingdom shall be governed. The Constitution shall have the highest legal status and all other laws and rules must be consistent with it.